Letter Of Response

ANKIT SHARMA

LETTER OF RESPONSE

WRA-150

September 16, 2011

Dear Hussain Alsatarwah,

I would alike to give you about information concerning your Literacy narrative

heeding in life. The theme you chose for your literacy is very appropriate .

The way you introduced your literacy in the first divide by mentioning that

everyone has a goal and a field of interest in which if they work hard they

succeed was nice . But there can be some repair work done.

You should concentrate a cumulation on grammatical errors as there are

a lot in the first paragraph itself. Etcetra should be ETC, and the starting broth

everyone has aim in his or her own life to suit succeed you should write it as

everyone has a aim in his or her own life to succeed. There are more(prenominal) mistakes

about which I will tell you further in this letter. You verbalize a thesis in your sixth

paragraph that because of your desire in electronics ,electrical engineering was your

first choice as a major. Then in the the forth paragraph you stated that your

interest in electronics blossomed during the high drill years.



The thing

lacking is that you should actually write what attracted you towards electrical

engineering, Was it some sort of mishap which happened with the technology you

were using? or was it by seeing forwarding of technology around you which

baffled you with its awesomeness? You should explain this in a more appropriate

way so that you convey the material idea of your literacy. You mentioned about your

childhood, how you went to an elementary nurture immediately aft(prenominal)

homeschooling. Having no experience at all. yes thats tough.

You wrote that your elementary school years were full of frustration but when you

went to high school you loved it. You stated that for some personal

problem you started thirst high school. the literacy narrative would become more

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